ROSE
A rose in the rain
You broke, you lusted
You hurt, and you didn't mind!
You left a heart bleeding
You left a soul wounding
You left a green spirit lost
In madness and dismay
Eyes which find
No more tears to cry
Have you ever asked your self
What a childish stride you've taken?
Should you feel culpable?
Just take a look behind you
And see what you left over there?
You just left me a rose in the rain
You broke, you lusted
You hurt, and you didn't mind!
You left a heart bleeding
You left a soul wounding
You left a green spirit lost
In madness and dismay
Eyes which find
No more tears to cry
Have you ever asked your self
What a childish stride you've taken?
Should you feel culpable?
Just take a look behind you
And see what you left over there?
You just left me a rose in the rain
15 Comments:
wowwwwwwww.....
slt morbid princess........vraiment c .......wow
*sigh* you post so few and far between. I hope I see you online later :)
We gotta talk! ....e-mail me, or IM.please!!
xx,Cain.
Like your poetry.
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My twin is here..
I love this place too. It speaks to me. Your poems match my heart, and the mix of good and bad in life.
I'm glad you found me. I'm glad that I found you. I'm writing today..
Devilbluedress
Hi, MPrincess!
~~smile!~~
xx,Cain.
Hi"TITUBA"I thank u so much for your works,but im thinking all the time about the reason that makes u so sad;maybe u feel fedup from life or because u r living near the gravyard(u have contacts with ghosts and u want 2 join them)or the most logic reason for me is that u have a dream and u r not able 2 trasform it 2 reality.in addition to that ther is an obvios contradiction;u r all the time smiling but in your poems u r crying(tandbi)any way greeting 2 u and happy holidays .be sure that whatever u do u stay KHAMOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURIA forever.(any comment my e-mail:bendaher10@YAHOO.FR.IF U HAVE THE EXAM OF HAROUNI OF THE LAST YEAR PLEAS SEND IT BY FRIDAY.
Hi"TITUBA"I thank u so much for your works,but im thinking all the time about the reason that makes u so sad;maybe u feel fedup from life or because u r living near the gravyard(u have contacts with ghosts and u want 2 join them)or the most logic reason for me is that u have a dream and u r not able 2 trasform it 2 reality.in addition to that ther is an obvios contradiction;u r all the time smiling but in your poems u r crying(tandbi)any way greeting 2 u and happy holidays .be sure that whatever u do u stay KHAMOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURIA forever.(any comment my e-mail:bendaher10@YAHOO.FR.IF U HAVE THE EXAM OF HAROUNI OF THE LAST YEAR PLEAS SEND IT BY FRIDAY.
YOUR ENEMY RAHIM.
hi zahia,when i red your poetry i felt that my soul will get out of my body;you know why.its terrible that a beautiful girl like you;may be pushed by some problems; to write like this and i cant help her...anyway my princess,if you need any help,any thing you want,ill be with you....w rahim ma tchoufiche lih raho khar menek bark....your classmate...$salim$.this is my e-mail:metal-slug2x2@hotmail.com.
Dropped in for a peek...
((hugs))
xx,Cain.
I have to imagine a rose in the desert would be much worse off.
Hope you're doing okay.
Been thinking of you.
~~x~~,Cain.(Billy B.)
I've been having these dreams lately.
Sorry, I haven't been chatting.
Hope you're well.
xx,Bill (Cain)
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