Friday, December 01, 2006

ROSE



A rose in the rain

You broke, you lusted
You hurt, and you didn't mind!
You left a heart bleeding
You left a soul wounding
You left a green spirit lost
In madness and dismay
Eyes which find
No more tears to cry
Have you ever asked your self
What a childish stride you've taken?
Should you feel culpable?
Just take a look behind you
And see what you left over there?
You just left me a rose in the rain

16 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

wowwwwwwww.....

01 December, 2006 10:18  
Blogger Stealthbombshell said...

beautiful

01 December, 2006 18:33  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

slt morbid princess........vraiment c .......wow

10 December, 2006 01:21  
Blogger Stealthbombshell said...

*sigh* you post so few and far between. I hope I see you online later :)

11 December, 2006 06:51  
Blogger Cain said...

We gotta talk! ....e-mail me, or IM.please!!

xx,Cain.

11 December, 2006 22:53  
Blogger Polyman3 said...

Like your poetry.

13 December, 2006 06:03  
Blogger StarCatcherSails said...

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13 December, 2006 08:47  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

My twin is here..
I love this place too. It speaks to me. Your poems match my heart, and the mix of good and bad in life.

I'm glad you found me. I'm glad that I found you. I'm writing today..

Devilbluedress

13 December, 2006 08:49  
Blogger Cain said...

Hi, MPrincess!

~~smile!~~

xx,Cain.

17 December, 2006 20:13  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi"TITUBA"I thank u so much for your works,but im thinking all the time about the reason that makes u so sad;maybe u feel fedup from life or because u r living near the gravyard(u have contacts with ghosts and u want 2 join them)or the most logic reason for me is that u have a dream and u r not able 2 trasform it 2 reality.in addition to that ther is an obvios contradiction;u r all the time smiling but in your poems u r crying(tandbi)any way greeting 2 u and happy holidays .be sure that whatever u do u stay KHAMOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURIA forever.(any comment my e-mail:bendaher10@YAHOO.FR.IF U HAVE THE EXAM OF HAROUNI OF THE LAST YEAR PLEAS SEND IT BY FRIDAY.

20 December, 2006 07:52  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi"TITUBA"I thank u so much for your works,but im thinking all the time about the reason that makes u so sad;maybe u feel fedup from life or because u r living near the gravyard(u have contacts with ghosts and u want 2 join them)or the most logic reason for me is that u have a dream and u r not able 2 trasform it 2 reality.in addition to that ther is an obvios contradiction;u r all the time smiling but in your poems u r crying(tandbi)any way greeting 2 u and happy holidays .be sure that whatever u do u stay KHAMOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURIA forever.(any comment my e-mail:bendaher10@YAHOO.FR.IF U HAVE THE EXAM OF HAROUNI OF THE LAST YEAR PLEAS SEND IT BY FRIDAY.

YOUR ENEMY RAHIM.

20 December, 2006 07:55  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi zahia,when i red your poetry i felt that my soul will get out of my body;you know why.its terrible that a beautiful girl like you;may be pushed by some problems; to write like this and i cant help her...anyway my princess,if you need any help,any thing you want,ill be with you....w rahim ma tchoufiche lih raho khar menek bark....your classmate...$salim$.this is my e-mail:metal-slug2x2@hotmail.com.

26 December, 2006 06:56  
Blogger Cain said...

Dropped in for a peek...

((hugs))

xx,Cain.

01 January, 2007 00:08  
Blogger morbid misanthrope said...

I have to imagine a rose in the desert would be much worse off.

29 January, 2007 18:18  
Blogger Cain said...

Hope you're doing okay.

Been thinking of you.

~~x~~,Cain.(Billy B.)

05 February, 2007 23:45  
Blogger Cain said...

I've been having these dreams lately.

Sorry, I haven't been chatting.

Hope you're well.

xx,Bill (Cain)

23 February, 2007 20:14  

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